deadSnowflake

2010/04/17

“………………………..……………."yet it is so"………………..……………….…”

Filed under: Romantic — karanfreud @ 02:18

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no one can ever love her, the way i did,

when it was about to get sold, someone else had the highest bid…

 

set it free they say, wait for its return,

being a parasite upon myself, i had a long way to run..

 

if death was a stage, long enough to change costumes,

you had the remote, i could have been stopped or resumed..

 

questions i have, never i had hoped for,

diseases being gifted, with a mask, searching for a cure..

 

i slowly read the thick book, all lines of all pages,

a golden cage, or portal to eternity, i’ll keep thinking for ages..

 

love lasting longest, is the one never returned,

so easy it is to forget, how can it be learnt??

 

who killed whom, was just a matter of fact,

but assassination of skin-deep thaughts, can either turn a fatal act..

 

i’ll take a leave now to nowhere,

coz its better never to meet you in thaughts, awake and reaching for hands which aren’t there..

 

my observations, feelings, interpretations, are all your truth,

yet it’s not the truth,

yet it’s not the only truth,

yet it seems to be so,

yet it is so……

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23 Comments »

  1. nyc one…..

    Comment by mandeep — 2010/04/17 @ 12:11 | Reply

  2. nice….!!!! 🙂

    Comment by Arushi — 2010/04/17 @ 16:14 | Reply

  3. nice!!

    Comment by Aman — 2010/04/17 @ 16:14 | Reply

  4. amazing…move on in life nd u wil surely succeed in lyf!

    Comment by chayan — 2010/04/17 @ 17:06 | Reply

    • why ppl sometimes comment upon my life n nt my work….????

      Comment by karanfreud — 2010/04/18 @ 09:15 | Reply

  5. this is goooooooooooooooodd stuff..

    Comment by Shubham — 2010/04/17 @ 17:09 | Reply

  6. hey.. dis is amazing.!!!
    kahan bba mein aa gye tum…
    poet hona chahiye tha tmhe toh.. gud 1 really…

    Comment by kanica — 2010/04/17 @ 17:27 | Reply

  7. beautiful it is.. i love how all your posts are so profound…

    Comment by Devanshi — 2010/04/17 @ 17:35 | Reply

    • thnx..
      strictly w.r.t. ur comment:
      beauty lies in d eyes of beholder….
      Don’t you believe that there is in man a deep so profound as to be hidden even to him in whom it is?

      Comment by karanfreud — 2010/04/18 @ 09:13 | Reply

  8. thr shud be no more poems now till ur exams…

    Comment by meenakshi — 2010/04/17 @ 17:40 | Reply

    • ok mummy..

      Comment by karanfreud — 2010/04/18 @ 09:16 | Reply

      • u right di…!!! no poems till xams…

        Comment by Arushi — 2010/04/19 @ 09:53

      • 😛

        Comment by Arushi — 2010/04/19 @ 09:54

  9. nice 1.. 🙂
    keep gng.. 🙂

    Comment by priyanka — 2010/04/17 @ 18:23 | Reply

  10. umm…gud work bro..!!
    some lines were very nyc..!!
    lyked it..!!
    🙂

    Comment by ashutosh — 2010/04/17 @ 21:06 | Reply

  11. n haan..!!
    d pics r also gud..
    mainly d last 1..!!..lolzz

    Comment by ashutosh — 2010/04/17 @ 21:11 | Reply

  12. good…but lacks poetic flow…

    Comment by peeyush — 2010/04/18 @ 03:05 | Reply

  13. Really an epic.. so well described, it evokes your emotions… simply awesome write-up mate ! keep it up 🙂

    Comment by Sahil Sinha — 2011/09/29 @ 08:25 | Reply

  14. awesome….i like ths one…
    gud stuff!!

    Comment by nitika — 2011/10/03 @ 12:01 | Reply

  15. Lovely expression of the feelings in rhyming tone. Even it would have been not rhyming it would have been great coz the intrinsic value is of feelings. You can let flow your heart easily and can relate your feelings to well diversified objects.

    Comment by Rishi — 2011/11/14 @ 13:43 | Reply


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